Friday, 15 June 2018
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Hello Jiten. How has your day been?
ReplyDeleteI love how you have thought of something that other people wouldn't have thought of, e.g the pirates and the fish on the sail. I love that you followed the instructions and did it in nice different colours so that it looks different then your classmates, I love how you named your boat fish boy that is a very creative name because in one of your other posts it said your passion is fishing. One idea is that you could have made your title (fish boy) bigger and underlined, but anyway I love the whole ship.
Thanks for the postive feedback. And things I could change
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